Brittunculi ([info]derryderrydown) wrote,
@ 2004-06-03 09:31:00
Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend!  Next Entry
Entry tags:fic: dcu, pairing: dick/jason

In which I aim for creepy...

I've been wanting somebody to write this. They didn't. Pooh.



Dick knew he was asleep and that was the only reason he stayed relaxed and calm as the figure approached his bed.

The outfit was familiar, despite the rips, the smoke-blackened fabric and the blood stains. And if the face was darkness, apart from the mask, well, that was probably better. Reassuring to know that his subconscious couldn't actually conjure up something that hideous.

The figure tilted its head as it crawled on to the bed. "It's okay, you know."

Dick felt the mattress tilt under him, the sheets moving against his skin, and reflected on how detailed this dream was.

"It's okay to fail. Every now and then. Just a little."

The figure slowly pulled the sheets down and Dick shifted slightly as the cool of the night hit his skin.

"I failed, you know. All the time."

Cold gauntlets smoothed over Dick's stomach.

"I was never what he wanted me to be. What you were."

Dick swallowed as the figure moved its touch lower.

"He still loved me."

Lower still, teasing now.

"He doesn't stop loving you because you fail."

Firm grip and Dick's response was perhaps disturbing but this was a dream and was probably symbolic of something completely different to what it looked like.

"He just stops trusting you."

Because what it looked like-

"Stops relying on you."

What it looked like-

"Stops making you feel like you matter."

Looked like-

"And maybe. Maybe I'm better off dead. Maybe it's better than that."

Dick lay gasping.

"I don't blame you, you know." The figure eased off Dick's bed and straightened its gauntlets. "Even if you'd helped me, it wouldn't have changed anything. I don't think." Smoothed rags of its yellow cloak. "Hard to tell now."

Dick watched the figure melt through his door and tried to breathe. It was a dream. He'd wake up soon.

He had to.

Because it had to be a dream.



(Post a new comment)


[info]tobiascharity
2004-06-03 05:48 am UTC (link)
*blinks* whoaaa. dead gay robin indeed.

*shivers*

(Reply to this)


[info]caia_comica
2004-06-03 06:04 am UTC (link)
Ai! Quite well done.

(Reply to this)


[info]burntcopper
2004-06-03 07:21 am UTC (link)
:points: stop with the creepiness now, young woman.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]derryderrydown
2004-06-03 08:57 pm UTC (link)
But I *like* creepy. Creepy's fun.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]meret
2004-06-03 01:01 pm UTC (link)
*blinks* Chilling!

(Reply to this)


[info]thete1
2004-06-03 01:18 pm UTC (link)
OH MY GOD.

OH MY GOD.

OH MY GOD.

I. Yes. Yes. Fucking *YES*.

Hopefully, I'll manage to be coherent when I rec the everloving HELL out of this.

(Reply to this)


[info]buggery
2004-06-03 01:26 pm UTC (link)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Jay... Dick... Jaaaaaaaaay!

::whimpering::

(Reply to this)


[info]sharpest_rose
2004-06-10 08:17 am UTC (link)
Oooooooooh. May I ask permission to archive this at one-nine-hundred? Because that was shiver-inducingly, well, haunting.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]sharpest_rose
2004-06-10 08:19 am UTC (link)
And it would help if I could type URLs, sorry. The site's at http://robin.oscillating.net . Apologies.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]derryderrydown
2004-06-10 08:58 am UTC (link)
Permission willingly granted! I can't believe I haven't actually been through that site before. It's fascinating and incredibly well-written.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]deconcentrate
2004-11-13 09:17 pm UTC (link)
That, derry, was creepy as hell and on-the-spot in all the right places.

Yeeow. *shivers*

(Reply to this)


[info]san_grail
2005-11-12 09:42 am UTC (link)
In which I just chime in with everyone else...

you suceeded in the creepy.

*shivers*

Thank you.

(Reply to this)


Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Login w/ OpenID
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…